Grab your plume, and let your words zoom across the page to form a poem of just 44 words (not counting the title) and including some form of the word zoom.
Vacuum teased wood-handled broom,
“You may swish but I can zoom.”
Broom unshaken by the brag
Tossed vacuum’s way a rag.
Vac inhaled then lost its buzz,
Producing clouds of dusty fuzz.
Broom swept-up and left the room.
Did the job without a “zoom”.
24 thoughts on “Quadrille Monday #173- Vacuum Brag”
Haha good one, Susan!
😁 Thanks, Paula.
Funny…i think kids would like this too!
The kid appeal occurred to me too. Thanks!
Very cute poem! Sounds like our modern world and new technology. No zoom left to get a buzzin’!
You are welcome!
Ha! So good! This one is so much fun!
Thanks! So happy it tickled you. 😁
A fun poem.
So happy that you liked it!
Very funny pic & poem.
😀 Glad to offer a smile.
Thank lots! 😐
Just love this. True simple is sometimes best! Well done Susan
😊❤ Thanks Mom.
Thanks for reminding me that I’m sposta get the vacuuming done before My Beloved Sandra gets home from lunch with her sister…
Ha! Put away the rags first. lol
Ha,.. funny one
Oh take a bow! I’m ginning here – that was delightful.