Let’s write our haibun that references the heart, in whatever context that you conceive. For those new to haibun, the form consists of one to a few paragraphs of prose—usually written in the present tense—that evoke an experience and are often non-fictional/autobiographical. They may be preceded or followed by one or more haiku—nature-based, using a seasonal image—that complement without directly repeating what the prose stated.

When animals hibernate in the winter, their hearts slow to a barest minimum for sustaining life. I often imagine frogs at the bottom of a pond or chipmunks in channels below the ground living life as a faint whisper one soft infrequent heartbeat at a time. In those long pauses is a mysterious hushed eternity that leads to an electrical instant of reclaiming life. Almost dead…ALIVE…almost dead...ALIVE…
Some say winter is a time of silence, of nothingness. That couldn’t be further from the truth. Can you hear it? Winter is a thrumming pause when Mother Nature’s life-pulse is the loudest to those persevering toward the Spring.
“Hush now” winter wind,
Hasten life to fill the void.
Her whispered rhythm.
https://dversepoets.com/2023/01/30/haibun-monday-1-30-23-heart/
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It is amazing, how nature finds a way. A wonderful write–thank you!
Well planned by forces greater than I. Thank-you!
Nice one!!!
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Beautiful
“Her whispered rythm “…indeed!
Evocative ink, Susan.
Thank-you, Nick 😁
I love your wonderful description of winter.
Much appreciated!
You are welcome!
I love the energy of this, nature thrumming – pulse the loudest, a counter story.
It’s like when you hold your breath your heartbeat seems louder and harder. I appreciate your comment. Thanks!
I love the end of the poem! Her in a whisper. So powerful.
Delighted by your comment! Thanks.
Your welcome!
I love this haibun so much… that last paragraph and your haiku make me long for spring!
Kind words and positive thoughts! Thank-you!
You’re most welcome.
That is just beautiful ❤
Your comment warms my heart. It’s ALIVE. ❤
Ha – Good! 🙂