Six Sentence Story – Filter

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Write 6 Sentences. No more. No less.
Use the current week’s prompt word.
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PROMPT WORD: FILTER 

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Spot saw the whole thing.

The illegal entry through the kitchen window, the trashing of the emptying cupboards, and the backdoor getaway, all while the family was on vacation.

He had sat motionless in the gravel trying not to draw any attention to himself because he knew, all too well, what happened to innocent witnesses of crimes from the missus binge watching all those ‘true crime’ stories on the kitchen TV every Sunday afternoon.

With his water and glass tank between himself and the crime, he got a magnificently clear 10X magnification of every detail but, unfortunately, describing those criminals’ voices would be impossible due to the deafening (terribly annoying) hum of the filter.

Upon the family’s return there were a lot of muffled squeals, shouts, and naughty words, before the police arrived, so all in all,-even though his disgusting gradual dissolving vacation feeder was gone- he didn’t get involved until the officer started asking for information which Spot was expectantly ready to divulge right down to the blue rose tattoo, nose-ring, and creepy lime green contact lenses the tall one wore.

Closing his notepad, the policeman stood asking the missus one last question, “What’s wrong with your fish?” because, by this time, Spot was doing the side stroke waving his fin out of the water wanting his turn but she, quite condescendingly, answered instead, “He’s just a greedy little bugger who is always begging for food.” so Spot decided, right then and there, never to tell them a DARN thing!


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25 thoughts on “Six Sentence Story – Filter

  1. Pat Brockett 03/17/2021 / 6:50 pm

    This is so creative. I love where your mind went to respond to our cue this week. Very clever and cute. Love “side stroke waving his fin out of the water.” HaHa

  2. Doug Jacquier 03/17/2021 / 8:08 pm

    Briliantly hilarious. The secret life of fish; who knew? 🙂

  3. Romi 03/17/2021 / 8:24 pm

    I like this story. 🙂

  4. clark 03/17/2021 / 8:39 pm

    Very fun Six.

    Surely one of the best things about this format is how it encourages us to take the (narrative) path less travelled.

    Out if the mouths of betas and all
    lol

    • Susan St.Pierre 03/17/2021 / 8:42 pm

      LOL… appreciate your comment. It was fun to tetra it to a new level. 😁

  5. Frank Hubeny 03/17/2021 / 9:21 pm

    That’s a good reason to keep quiet. It must be frustrating not to be able to help.

    • Susan St.Pierre 03/18/2021 / 7:47 am

      He’s going to have to start writing in order to vent. lol Thanks.

  6. GirlieOnTheEdge 03/17/2021 / 10:06 pm

    “What’s wrong with your fish?” 😀
    Fun and funny Six, Susan!

    • Susan St.Pierre 03/18/2021 / 7:46 am

      It was last minute too. Seems it’s better not to plan them. Thanks!

  7. Chris Hall 03/18/2021 / 9:02 am

    What great fun! You raised a smile 🙂

  8. UP 03/18/2021 / 10:23 am

    creative and funny so well done!

  9. -Eugenia 03/25/2021 / 8:39 pm

    How clever and delightful! Thank you so much for following my blog.

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