
No vista of Freedom endures
A man-made lens.
State rule upends…
Government spends…
Censorship trends…
Shutdown extends…
Justice? Depends…
Crafted by individuals,
America can not tolerate much more
Nonsense.
(29 words)
Weekend Writing Prompt #200 – Vista – Sammi Cox (wordpress.com)
I agree with everyone of your 29 words. Your words rhyming and not tell a disturbing story.
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Excellent!
Thank-you. Dale. 😀
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True everywhere, sadly. A truth so well expressed.
Yes! You sadly can plug in any Western Democracy and it fits. Thanks!
I don’t know about America, but I know I’ve just about had enough! Expertly done 🙂
Thanks. It unfortunately is common everywhere.
Excellently said!
😁 You made me smile! Thanks!
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And not just America. I feel a rebellion coming on!
Seems inevitable.
Dear Susan,
Well said. Enough already.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thank you Rochelle. Peace!