d’Verse Quadrille- Swift

A quadrille is a poem of 44 words, including the prompt word, or a variation of that prompt word. And the word I’ve chosen tonight is “swift”.


A city fella bought a jeep
Went to find a hill real steep

Miles from the lights and glow
Found a meadow filled with snow

A sudden pitch
A hidden ditch

The farmer found him in a drift
Them city fellas ain’t too swift.


Quadrille: swift | dVerse (dversepoets.com)

21 thoughts on “d’Verse Quadrille- Swift

  1. Beverly Crawford 03/08/2021 / 6:24 pm

    LOVE IT! Smiles are few and far between, so this is most welcome!

  2. lynn__ 03/08/2021 / 10:00 pm

    LOL! Cute and clever 🙂

    • Susan St.Pierre 03/09/2021 / 7:01 am

      Appreciate your giggle. Makes me giggle right back. Thanks, Lynn.

  3. jazzytower 03/08/2021 / 11:20 pm

    Such fun… love the rhymes. 🙂

    Pat

  4. rogblog666 03/09/2021 / 1:46 am

    thanks for putting a smile o my face

  5. sarahsouthwest 03/09/2021 / 4:41 am

    This made me laugh! Great use of vernacular here, and the rhyme scheme is lots of fun.

  6. Ron Rowland 03/09/2021 / 5:47 am

    Nice. Yours is the first I’ve read to use swift when speaking of intelligence level instead of quickness or a bird. It’s been a a while since I’ve heard that phrase.

    • Susan St.Pierre 03/09/2021 / 6:54 am

      Much appreciated. I hadn’t realized how old I am until you reminded me of the outdated definition. lol 😉

  7. Xan 03/09/2021 / 11:08 am

    laughing out loud. thank you!

  8. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) 03/09/2021 / 3:42 pm

    Ha… yes it’s not easy… you have to have both tools and skill, not just the money and will

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