Waiting…

male

He must be important

Proud, strong and full of lust.

***

She builds, nurtures and carries.

***

Master of his world

Conquering and seducing .

***

Her life is dauntless and driven.

***

Bright colors and a posture perfect

Anticipating a fight…a war.

***

Within her beats the new life…miracles.

***

Been said, “Lonely at the top.”

He is waiting.

***

She remains to busy to notice…

female

41 thoughts on “Waiting…

  1. Jingle 05/12/2011 / 7:29 am

    love it,

    your words have wings, beautiful flow.

    🙂

    Happy Rally.

  2. David Munro 05/12/2011 / 8:10 am

    I liked this.

    Had to read it several times for it to sink in – but was pleased when it did.

  3. Jamie Dedes 05/12/2011 / 8:30 am

    This is so charming, Susan. Thank you!

    What fabulous photos you are collection here. Nice!

    Hope you are enjoying your spring …

    • sillyfrogsusan 05/12/2011 / 10:49 am

      I appreciate your visits…Happy Springtime to you! ❤

  4. C Rose 05/12/2011 / 10:17 am

    A wonderful orchestration in this piece. Lovely ~ Rose

    • sillyfrogsusan 05/12/2011 / 10:47 am

      Mother’s day is so well timed, don’t you agree? Thanks!

  5. Tally 05/12/2011 / 9:29 pm

    Genders well defined in how they act, the ending made me grin.

    • sillyfrogsusan 05/13/2011 / 5:56 am

      Thanks…I grin every time I reread it too! Ain’t I a stinker ? LOL!

  6. Classic NYer 05/12/2011 / 10:31 pm

    I really like this poem. I love how you juxtaposed the male v. female mentality… If i didn’t know you were talking about birds, I would think you were talking about people. 🙂

    • sillyfrogsusan 05/13/2011 / 5:55 am

      I believe that the similarity to people is undeniable…thanks for your thoughts ❤

  7. Iris D 05/13/2011 / 11:24 am

    Ah, robins speak spring to us and I like the way you contrast the male/female thought process and implication of human species.
    Cute/
    Iris
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  8. seabell 05/13/2011 / 11:05 pm

    It’s really nice when people observe and translate it in words… You have done that beautifully!

  9. Helena 05/14/2011 / 2:51 pm

    I love the male/female bird thing – especially the lengths males go to to captivate a female!

    You depicted part of this delightfully in your prose and pictures. One up for the female methinks!

    • sillyfrogsusan 05/15/2011 / 3:12 pm

      Thanks! Yes, we have the true pulse of life, don’t we?

  10. Pat Cegan 05/16/2011 / 6:40 pm

    Your blog is Stunning! And your poetry charming. Thanks for your visit so I could find you! Hugs, pat

  11. Jess 05/16/2011 / 9:28 pm

    you paint the picture well. good job.

  12. pandamoniumcat 05/17/2011 / 3:44 am

    This is so lovely, so simple but such beauty. Thank you for sharing.

    • sillyfrogsusan 05/17/2011 / 5:30 am

      It has been delightful to make new friends…thanks!

  13. lolamouse 05/17/2011 / 9:46 pm

    So true! The males are always vying for attention while the females are busy taking care of everything! Lovely pictures!

    • sillyfrogsusan 05/18/2011 / 6:21 am

      It seems to me that the males are not able to enjoy the “little” things enough. Thanks!

  14. carefreewanderer 05/18/2011 / 2:07 am

    This is beautiful! And sadly, this poem relates not only to birds, but also to humans as well. Beatiful flow!

    • sillyfrogsusan 05/18/2011 / 6:22 am

      I feel sorry for the male…he seems OK with it though. LOL! Thank-you!

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