
The little one said,
“You are so colorful and cast the larger shadow.”
The big one replied,
“We are made of the same elements and you chose a different path.”
“You are always busy, filled with life.”
“You are content in keeping your feelings facing away.”
“It pleases me to be the observer, I like to watch.”
“You are my balance, my friend and companion.”
“I know you’ll always be near.”
“I could not exist but for your support.”
Then the Earth smiled at the Moon.
Pure delight. You enjoy the children so … and I know they must enjoy you, able as you are to enter their world and support it. Just wonderful. On a “catch-up” visit here …
I feel so flattered to be your friend. THANKS!
wow pure flow of beautiful emotions and love…
we are two brothers and i always wished i had a sister cause he( my elder bro) would beat the shit out of me at times…but in times of trouble he would be my shield and my back bone till date 😀 reading this just brought back childhood memories …thank u for writing this.
Cheers!!!
and ur granddaughter is so cute…
Thank-you my friend…believe it or not, my sister and I have never had one unkind word for each other.(I am older by 5 years and we have a brother in between.)
The more that I hear about sibling relationships, the more I treasure her!
And i smile upon you !! 🙂 really touching words ..
Thank-you for appreciating my tribute to sisterhood 🙂
Just lovely! The fairytale quality of this is wonderful.
I hadn’t thought of the “fairy tale” feel…thanks for the wonderful insight!
Wish I was a kid again…. nice stuff
Warm regards
Luke @ WordSalad
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So happy to meet you…Love your blog name too!
DEEElicious!
simply amazing, two in love and in a perfect balance..
blissful read,
vivid dialogue…
thanks for sharing your wisdom and lovely poetry with us.
Happy Monday,
have fun sharing and reading…
share more if you wish.
Cheers!
Thank you! Mondays are becoming a much awaited day for me…great idea to pre-post themes!
Have a fun birthday!
Beautiful poem, this! End got me transfixed.. and I remembered your anglic visit to my page today.. thank you for honouring me..
Your work pleases me, your comments are a delight!
Thank-you friend!
How lovely. Reminds me of the song “Wind Beneath my Wings.”
Wonderful dialogue and thoughts.. Susan… a kind of childlike discussion which ended with a profound thought….
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
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Thank-you…We now refer to ourselves as “Earth” and “Moon” 🙂
What a super poem. I always like your work.
Lately, I’ve been choosing a photo first, then wrapping words around it.
Your visit and words are always welcome here, my friend.
Delightful poetry, i love the end, it’s perfect. 🙂
Your entry was like viewing a fine piece of artwork…Thank you
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thanks for the contribution…
here is one of mine:
cool perspective.
Thanks for commenting…it came to me one night during the full moon, really 🙂
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! It is awesome! I had never thought of them as sisters.
Beautiful Potluck!
Wonderful comment for giving a new writer a smile:-)